The story starts with quite an interesting scenario having Vegeta, a known tough guy strolling through the park. After abruptly meeting and arguing about intelligence and terrorism with George Bush, they engage in a full out battle. Ending with an ego struck prince of saiyans (Vegeta) and a robot revealed George Bush trying to push his views right to the end.
I liked the fact that the author brought some of Geore Bush's presidential flaws into the story. I didnt like Vegeta's dialogue as it was not characteristic of him in parts, i think the author could have looked at this area abit more.
2. Terminator fan fiction
Kyle has survived the nuclear blasts and living in a terminator run world. Working as a slave outside with other human survivors, he starts to have ideas of escaping from the terminators.
The author introduces an interesting idea of the life kyle faces after the nuclear attacks, and is very plausible. I liked that it was'nt too overboard right from the start. I thought there was too much narrative passage and not enough dialogue from the characters.
Conan has a drunken and lovemaking filled night with a girl he meets.
His friends pull a prank on him by putting a snake in the bed waiting for when he wakes up.
I like the author has made a humorous adventure showing Conan's party boy side. The writing was very well in most parts, very descriptive. I think it should have been more explicit.
Chris Griffin falls off a bike and meets a girl. Coincidentally, she goes to the same school. Chris loves the fact that she is a movie buff.
Chris's character was not funny enough for me, as with the father's dialogue. Being a family guy fan fiction I would have liked to see more Stewie in the dialogue. I think the ending left abit to be explained aswel.
5. Simpsons fan fiction
This chapter of simpsons fan fiction starts with them sitting at the table.
Homer starts to go through the mail. He finds a letter with music script
on it and throws it out. Lisa, irritated with homer's ignorance, grabs the
letter from the bin and heads to he room, then dozes off to sleep.This chapter was very good right from the start. I liked the setting in the
family home that was created. Also, the dialogue was comedic and suited the characters well.
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